Story [poem] night

[annique]

Night

As the wind brings the leaves
The night comes with its dimmed light
And leaves paradise all black-tinged
And upheaves a deep starry sky

There is nothing underneath sight
But we strive, since we're naive,
Even for a brief meaning for life
I see only pit dark and twingling stars!​

 

[rationaltake]

Absolutely lovely. Thank you.

 

[FuneralCry]

Thank you for sharing. It is a very nice poem. You are talented.

 

[annique]

Absolutely lovely. Thank you.

Thank you for sharing. It is a very nice poem. You are talented.

Thank you for liking it

 

[Nirrend]

Thank you for this poem, very calming !

 

[annique]

Thank you for this poem, very calming !

 

[yıη]

I went outside tonight to experience this as you may have when you decided to write this. As I read it, the wind was blowing leaves everywhere. I wish I could have seen the stars.

 

[annique]

I went outside tonight to experience this as you may have when you decided to write this. As I read it, the wind was blowing leaves everywhere. I wish I could have seen the stars.

That is lovely

 

[ButterflyWings]