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Caustic Cardinals

Caustic Cardinals

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frantic,
frantic for release
liberation from this toxic state of self-disbelief .
clawing,
clawing at this fleshy cage
claws hopeless helpless rage.
Scars, bruises cuts burns
memories
the trauma churns,
 
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anna

anna

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one of my favorites
GXBS5hO.jpg
 
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anna

downfall
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He also used to write ...
but too personal to publish it
This is another one of my favorites

There will come soft rains

They will come soft rains and the smell of the earth,
And swallows circling with their faint sounds;

And frogs in ponds sing at night,
And wild plum trees in tremulous white.

Robins will wear his plumed fire,
Whistling their whims on a wire fence.

And no one will know of the war, no
It will worry at the end when everything is finished.

No one would mind, neither bird nor tree,
If humanity completely perished;

And Spring herself, when she wakes at dawn
Just it would realize we're gone.
( S.T.)
 
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weedoge

weedoge

Banned
Jul 12, 2018
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frantic,
frantic for release
liberation from this toxic state of self-disbelief .
clawing,
clawing at this fleshy cage
claws hopeless helpless rage.
Scars, bruises cuts burns
memories
the trauma churns,
I like it, let us know when you've written some more. Combination of half and full rhymes is pretty nice, it *sounds* good.

How profound...
This comment made me snort somehow
 
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Caustic Cardinals

Caustic Cardinals

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I like it, let us know when you've written some more. Combination of half and full rhymes is pretty nice, it *sounds* good.


This comment made me snort somehow
thank you
 
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Deleted member 1768

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I reach out in silence
Where no one can see me
And no one can hear.

I wander so weary
Through life in the darkness
Where follow the shadows
Right on my heels.
 
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Deleted member 1768

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Seize

An earthquake
Incandescent fire,
Lost time,
And death
No longer waiting
Comes...
If not before
The winter's snow
I'll use these keys
So cruelly given
And on that wasteland
Frozen lie,
Seize once...
And die.

Just to let you know that I took 8gm. of an anti-epileptic in the summer. My roomies came home, and well....here I am. My initial plan was to wait until winter. Walking, staying awake was impossible on such a high dose and freezing, although not pleasant, would definitely have meant my demise.
 
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Living

A silent plea
Made mute of voice,
A cry that lays souls bare,
A wailing, weeping, wrenching cry
That never can be heard,
That buried deep
Within the heart
Makes all of dreams,
Absurd.
 
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Storm

The wind rises,
Its firm breath cool...
Penetrating.

It slips with strong--
And agile fingers
Over burning flesh.

Releasing in its wake
The sleeping body
Dormant--
Still...
 
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No Answer

I sat for an age
In the long grass
Waiting,
'Neath a tree
In a circle of shade,
While the sunbeams
Played,
And the branches swayed
To a softly caressing
Breeze.
 
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I like it, let us know when you've written some more. Combination of half and full rhymes is pretty nice, it *sounds* good.


This comment made me snort somehow
Absolutely phenomenal Caustic...you really are a genius...
 
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wezel

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Aug 14, 2018
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Above all summits
it is calm.
In all the tree-tops
you feel
scarcely a breath;
the birds in the forest are silent.
Just wait, soon
you will rest as well.

( J.W.v.Goethe 1749-1832 )
 
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No Answer

I sat for an age
In the long grass
Waiting,
'Neath a tree
In a circle of shade,
While the sunbeams
Played,
And the branches swayed
To a softly caressing
Breeze.
Aye, you understand this Caustic. I am not sure many would.
 
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Deleted member 1768

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frantic,
frantic for release
liberation from this toxic state of self-disbelief .
clawing,
clawing at this fleshy cage
claws hopeless helpless rage.
Scars, bruises cuts burns
memories
the trauma churns,
I am without words Caustic. This is the most revealing, heart-rending work I have ever seen/known. Thank you for the privilege.
 
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Caustic Cardinals

Caustic Cardinals

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I am without words Caustic. This is the most revealing, heart-rending work I have ever seen/known. Thank you for the privilege.[/QUOTE
I am without words Caustic. This is the most revealing, heart-rending work I have ever seen/known. Thank you for the privilege.
I wish I could believe you
 
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I am without words Caustic. This is the most revealing, heart-rending work I have ever seen/known. Thank you for the privilege.
Jees, that is good Caustic. I want a copy...smile...seriously. If it is alright. It is a tremendous piece of art.
 
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Did you write, "I wish I could believe you"? Honestly I really think you are the most talented lyricist I have ever known, and I come from a long line of writers...yep.
 
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one of my favorites
GXBS5hO.jpg
Lol!...here I am trying to see the 4 poems and wondering, in great exasperation, why I cannot see them...chuckle...that IS the poem...duh.
 
Caustic Cardinals

Caustic Cardinals

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Sep 1, 2018
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I like it, let us know when you've written some more. Combination of half and full rhymes is pretty nice, it *sounds* good.


This comment made me snort somehow
THank you, I'll try too
 
Caustic Cardinals

Caustic Cardinals

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Sep 1, 2018
1,339
Did you write, "I wish I could believe you"? Honestly I really think you are the most talented lyricist I have ever known, and I come from a long line of writers...yep.
I'm brimming with unused and wasted talent, according to my last english arts professor.
 

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