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gnarly

gnarly

Rest in Peace
Sep 24, 2024
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He screams for savior,
He reached into the heavens,
Crying in the sky,
He couldn't believe it was all a lie,
His body falls back down,
He's basically a husk,
The scar they left on his heart,
Was like 1 million cuts

The rain pours down,
As he stares down at the ground,
As the voice in his head gets loud,
The stars shined brightly,
As the sun went down.

he could no longer look up,
For his star was gone,
He could no longer feel love,
Death by 1 million cuts.
 
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kitia973

kitia973

Hello
Dec 24, 2024
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Wonderful poem! Love the use of vivid imagery and symbolism.
 
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