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Centerism

Centerism

Love is my final option
Aug 25, 2019
233
I write a lot of poetry. This one I just wrote trying to find some simple words to reveal that I'm suicidal. I posted it to Facebook hoping maybe someone will see it and realize I'm not ok. It's kind of a have rescuing up from the pits of darkness.

I plan to write something similar to this to accompany my suicide note.

Laying in comfort,
Cold release of dread filled dreams.
Wanting nothing more than leave,
So bad I crave your tenderness.
It's warm up there?

Do I need you,
Least of life conquered passion.
Pain reveals the light,
Dependence dreams life alerted.
Do we live up there?

Sifting through crimson sands,
It drops beating thump of heart.
Last breath conceals all,
We live to die.
Are you happy up there?

It's time...

Hope y'all liked that.

Love ya!
 
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WhiteDespair

WhiteDespair

The Temporary Problem is Life
Oct 24, 2019
837
I write a lot of poetry. This one I just wrote trying to find some simple words to reveal that I'm suicidal. I posted it to Facebook hoping maybe someone will see it and realize I'm not ok. It's kind of a have rescuing up from the pits of darkness.

I plan to write something similar to this to accompany my suicide note.

Laying in comfort,
Cold release of dread filled dreams.
Wanting nothing more than leave,
So bad I crave your tenderness.
It's warm up there?

Do I need you,
Least of life conquered passion.
Pain reveals the light,
Dependence dreams life alerted.
Do we live up there?

Sifting through crimson sands,
It drops beating thump of heart.
Last breath conceals all,
We live to die.
Are you happy up there?

It's time...

Hope y'all liked that.

Love ya!
Not bad.
 
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