Short Story I Wrote For an Online Contest

[pharma]

I wrote this for a contest for the SCP Foundation Wiki. It's a story representing my grief and the generational trauma I've endured. I haven't had anyone to look and critique it yet, so I wanted to share it here to see if it resonated with anybody else. I don't really have any friends to share it with.

 

[theboy]

Interesting

 

[pharma]

Interesting

Appreciate that. curious what stood out to you

 

[theboy]

Appreciate that. curious what stood out to you

Participants' objectives and results

It was like reading a video game mission

 

[pharma]

Participants' objectives and results

It was like reading a video game mission

Hm. In a good or bad way? It's part of the competition to make it sound "clinical"

 

[theboy]

mmm

bad for the ending of the characters

I mean, it's not "bad" as a story, but how their actions got to that point.

Hm. In a good or bad way? It's part of the competition to make it sound "clinical"